Sunday, July 31

Six Sentence Sunday 1

Hey everyone! I've decided to try out something new. So, here's goes! These six sentences are when Adara see Rei in human form for the first time.

Her words and anger stuck in her throat as she realized a tiger no longer stood before her. The beast had been replaced by a man. A man with dark brown eyes and a sensual mouth. His large build shocked her. Her kind was tall, yet he towered over her. The sight of him stole her breath.

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17 comments:

  1. oh, saucy six, and I imagined he had no cloths on...naughty me ;)

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  2. A weretiger for the first Six, lovely! Welcome! :)

    ~Xakara
    Dawn's Early Light 6SS

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  3. I like the direct, simplicity of this. You're letting the reader decide what to think of him. Nice!

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  4. Oh yum. Men with sensual mouths are so hot!

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  5. Thanks for the comments everyone! I'm so glad you guys stopped by and enjoyed my six sentences! :-D

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  6. That's got to be a shocker -- but in a good way. Good six.

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  7. Great six! I love were-cats so I wanted to drop in and say hi.

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  8. Thank you, Sandy! Yeah, she was pretty shocked. :)

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  9. Hey Marie! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know to change the comments settings! I'm glad you really liked my six.

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  10. Hi Lindsay! Thanks for commenting! She's an Amazon warrior princess.

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  11. Welcome!

    ...I was a little confused by the first two lines... it sounds like she blinked and instantly the tiger was a man... that quick. I think it's 'cause you used the word 'replaced'.

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  12. Hi Monkey! Thanks for stopping by! Actually, she wasn't looking at him when he changed into a tiger. She was walking away from him. These sentences are what happens when she looks back at him.

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  13. I'd love to win a book from you. I follow you on twitter (@sheropatra) and I retweeted you.
    Thanks,
    Sherri A. Dub
    sheropatra@yahoo.com

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  14. Thanks for the comment and the retweet, Sherri! :-)

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