Her words and anger stuck in her throat as she realized a tiger no longer stood before her. The beast had been replaced by a man. A man with dark brown eyes and a sensual mouth. His large build shocked her. Her kind was tall, yet he towered over her. The sight of him stole her breath.
Jungle Heat now available from Changeling Press.
17 comments:
oh, saucy six, and I imagined he had no cloths on...naughty me ;)
A weretiger for the first Six, lovely! Welcome! :)
~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS
he sounds sexy. YUM.
I like the direct, simplicity of this. You're letting the reader decide what to think of him. Nice!
Oh yum. Men with sensual mouths are so hot!
yup. It would take my breath too.
Thanks for the comments everyone! I'm so glad you guys stopped by and enjoyed my six sentences! :-D
That's got to be a shocker -- but in a good way. Good six.
Great six! I love were-cats so I wanted to drop in and say hi.
Thank you, Sandy! Yeah, she was pretty shocked. :)
Hey Marie! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know to change the comments settings! I'm glad you really liked my six.
Wonder what her kind is?
Hi Lindsay! Thanks for commenting! She's an Amazon warrior princess.
Welcome!
...I was a little confused by the first two lines... it sounds like she blinked and instantly the tiger was a man... that quick. I think it's 'cause you used the word 'replaced'.
Hi Monkey! Thanks for stopping by! Actually, she wasn't looking at him when he changed into a tiger. She was walking away from him. These sentences are what happens when she looks back at him.
I'd love to win a book from you. I follow you on twitter (@sheropatra) and I retweeted you.
Thanks,
Sherri A. Dub
sheropatra@yahoo.com
Thanks for the comment and the retweet, Sherri! :-)
Post a Comment